Thursday, 26 January 2017


LOCATION FOR THRILLER OPENING
Image result for mill hillImage result for hampstead garden suburbsImage result for woodside park (TOP RIGHT: HAMP GS. TOP LEFT: MILL HILL. BOTTOM: WOODSIDE PARK)
Since the thriller opening is supposed to be this antiques dealer driving through a nice area fool of greenery, we need somewhere nearby, that appears similar (i.e; a lot of greenery and high end houses) to use for the opening. Out of several options - which included: Hampstead Garden Suburbs, Woodside Park, Mill Hill - we decided to go for Hampstead Garden Suburbs (specifically around the heath extension). We though this would be best suited to the way we want to portray this location in the opening (a mixture of greenery and houses). 
SHOT-LIST
Today I completed the shot-list for our thriller opening. It consists of all the necessary camera angles, settings, and cast for each specific shot of the opening. I believe that this is key to making our thriller opening in an organised, professional manner, which will hopefully better the outcome of our final product. Even though this is set and show us what we have to do, we will still do more shots and cutaways on the spot that we feel are good for the thriller.

Tuesday, 24 January 2017

PREPARATION FOR THRILLER
Now, with the main idea of our opening developed, Charlie and I now began thinking about props,  an actor, location - all the details we need to make it. Right now, what we plan to do is use Charlie's dad (Stephen Budd) as the main actor (also the only actor we need).
Steve official pic.jpg
Image result for old mercedes silverWe believe he is the right person to play our classy antiques dealer. Also, Stephen's car is perfect for the movie. A vintage Mercedes (except his is silver). I think this will make our opening more stylish and classy.

Monday, 23 January 2017

Speechless Animatic

SPEECHLESS ANIMATIC






This is an animatic made from our storyboard. It has a time sequence similar to what we hope for the final product, and it should be a good to help us know which shots we need to do.


WORK TODAY

Today Charlie and I produced an animatic for our storyboard. Sadly, neither of us are the most gifted illustrators, but I think our storyboard is good enough to help produce our opening. The animatic will soon be viewable on this blog.

Sunday, 22 January 2017

WORK TODAY

Today Charlie and I drew up storyboard for our thriller opening. Although I contributed in terms of creating the idea for each shot, Charlie had to do the difficult task of imagining them and drawing the picture in his mind. This is soon to be made into an animatic, and will be uploaded  to this blog very soon. 

Friday, 20 January 2017

CREATING NAME FOR MY THRILLER

Since writing the treatment to my thriller, I had not come up with a name for it, till now. Recently, I partnered up with Charlie to produce the opening, and we agreed to finally sit down and brainstorm ideas for a title. Now, after a couple of days, we have come up with a name for the thriller;

SPEECHLESS

Tuesday, 17 January 2017

Friday, 13 January 2017

Designing Mood board

The past two lessons I have been developing a mood board for my thriller's opening title sequence. I originally collected pictures that I found on google images, that I thought were most associated with my idea for the thriller opening, and made a collage of them in a word document. But it didn't look too neat, so I decided to use a template for the mood board on Photoshop, as it put the images together in a very neat way. I am now almost finished with this mood board, even though I found it very difficult to get used to using Photoshop.


Tuesday, 10 January 2017

LOGLINE FOR THRILLER
As mentioned previously on this blog, I have been attempting to create a logline for my thriller. Now I have come up with on that I find most appropriate and am ready to reveal it:

A young rookie detective investigates the twisted murders of several teenage drug dealers in Tottenham, London.

Sunday, 8 January 2017


LOCKE

Locke film poster

LOCKE is about how a man's life unravels after he leaves a construction site at a critical time and drives to London to be present for the birth of a child conceived during a one-night stand. Tom Hardy stars in this "nail-biting thriller"  as supposedly to be one of his best roles. Almost all the shots are shot in a car of him driving (like the one to the left), and there is a great use of camera angles in doing this. I am thinking of doing something similar for my thriller, so I will take inspiration from this.

Saturday, 7 January 2017

Work on Thrillers

To produce the opening title sequence of our thrillers, we were put into groups. Me and Charlie decided to use my thriller idea for the opening sequence, and began getting to work at it. In the past couple of lessons, we have come up with ideas for the opening title sequence, and also maid slight adjustments to the treatment of our thriller.

Friday, 6 January 2017

Logline For My Thriller

Don Vito.
log line or logline is a brief (usually one-sentence) summary of a television program, film, or book that states the central conflict of the story, often providing both a synopsis of the story's plot, and an emotional "hook" to stimulate interest. A one-sentence program summary in TV Guide is a log line
For example, The Godfather's logline is: The aging patriarch of an organized crime dynasty transfers control of his clandestine empire to his reluctant son.

My log line must be catchy enough to get anyone interested in a thriller hooked on the idea, whilst being very short and simple. Over the passed few days I have been trying to make the log line for my thriller, but been unsuccessful, but I believe now after looking at many log lines of different movies of different genres, I will be able to come up with one within a day.

Wednesday, 4 January 2017

Prisoners

Prisoners, released in 2013, is a mysterious crime-thriller starring Hugh Jackman and Jake Gyllenhaal. I watched it last night, and I believe it is a very well made thriller, with several tropes of a classy thriller, with yet an unexpected twist. From watching this, I would like to use some of the elements of this movie, in my thriller opening - e.g; gloomy atmosphere, dull colours, but also the feel of tension throughout the movie.
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Monday, 2 January 2017

TREATMENT

A teenage boy goes missing a few months after two other teenage boys went missing in Tottenham London. The bodies of the first two teenagers who disappeared have already been found – both a week after their disappearance in different dumpsters, stripped naked, wrapped in rogues, with their tongues removed and with their mouths sewed closed. As a result of a lack of care from higher-ranking police officers for crime in a rougher area, involving poorer people the case of investigating these disappearances is handed to young rookie policeman (Zachary).

After questioning parents, searching rooms and checking phone records and such of these boys, he has reason to believe that they were all dealing drugs (cocaine and marijuana specifically).
But during several stages of the investigation he gets tangled up emotionally with his memories and experiences of his brother and close friends getting involved with drug use and trade (when he was 15 his 18 year old brother got stabbed because of a drug deal disagreement).

A week after Zachary is given the case, the body of the latest missing teenager is recovered in a dumpster, also wrapped in a rogue, stripped naked, with his tongue removed and mouth sewed closed.
So, moving forward with his investigation, looking through CCTV footage over different parts of the area and phone records of the three teenagers, Zachary is able to narrow down suspects to a potential four people for questioning, believing that only one is responsible for all three teenagers deaths – as a result of all bodies being found in the same fashion. From this, he begins questioning suspects one by one knocking on their doors and interrogating them.
After interrogating and doing background research on two of the suspects, Zachary is able not to cancel out, but highly reduce suspicion of them, as they have viable alibies – even though admitting to marijuana use in the past, and testing positive in drug tests for marijuana but not any other drugs.

One of the remaining suspects (an average middle classed Caucasian who was an ex-police officer and partner of the present chief of police, and is now an antiques dealer) demonstrates a lack of empathy towards the teenager’s deaths in questioning. Although at the moment this suspect has only admitted to buying cocaine and marijuana off two of the teenagers for his drug habit, Zachary is very suspicious of him and has a deep underlying feel that he is the murderer, even though there is a lack of evidence to suggest so.
Zachary does some background research on this suspect, to find that he was severely physically abused by his parents, and then questions his old school councillor about his school life, only to find out that he was bullied and had no friends.
After finding CCTV footage and phone records of the other remaining suspect potentially selling drugs to all three of the teenagers and also finding drugs in his estate, Zachary begins to believe he was providing the teenagers with the drugs, and potentially killed them as a result of disagreement. From overwhelming evidence of drug dealing, that suspect is arrested (not for the murders though) along with four other men who are tied up in his small time drug circle.

As a result of higher suspicion of this drug dealer, the chief of police and higher ranking police officers urge Zachary to focus all attention of the investigation on to this drug dealing suspect, and avoid the other suspects entirely (but Zachary believes there is an element of racism and a want to tie up the case as quick as possible to cut costs involved in their opinions, as it would be way more straight forward to build a case against this suspect rather than the other weird one).

Although Zachary still thinks that the drug-dealing suspect may have been responsible for the murders, he secretly focuses more on the background of the stranger suspect, as a result of how the bodies were found in quite a sick way (with the tongues removed). So Zachary reveals to the chief of police that he truly believes that the stranger suspect is the one responsible for the murders (with evidence such as him buying the same bubble wrap used to wrap the children a month before the first teenager was murdered) but is immediately shut down and told to focus only on the drug dealing suspect, or else he will be taken off the case and probably loose his job (as it is his first case).

Despite his boss’ wishes Zachary continues to focus his attention and energy on developing a better case against the stranger suspect, breaking into his flat while he is out shopping. To his rage and disappointment, he finds no evidence to suggest he had anything to do with the murders, but sees a photo, which looks about 10-20 years old, of the suspect with his mother and father in front of an old looking house in a very rural area. Whilst in the apartment, the suspect arrives back from shopping, and Zachary is just able to escape through a window without his face being seen, but the suspect realizes that someone had broken into the flat

Previously Zachary had looked for all other estates in his name or his family’s name, and found none, but after seeing this photo, he searched deep into the roots of his family, and found out that there was still an abandoned estate, in the name of the suspect’s great uncle’s wife (from his mother’s side) under her maiden name, in Hemel Hempstead

The next time that Zachary goes into the police station though, he is brought into the chief’s office, and is taken off the case and fired – as the suspect had a hidden camera in his apartment, and showed the footage of Zachary breaking into his apartment to the chief of police.
Upset and desperate for justice, a now jobless Zachary goes out to Letchmore Heath to inspect this abandoned estate, and breaks into the house to find absolutely nothing, but sees a small shed far behind the backside of the house covered by a lot of greenery, but still in the estate. He then breaks into this shed and searches it, still finding nothing, but steps over a piece of the floor board in the corner of the shed that feels hollow underneath it. Desperately, he breaks of those pieces of floor board to find a bundle of folded clothes (clothes of the victims) and underneath these clothes he finds a chest. He opens the chest to see a bloody sewing kit with three little sphere shaped items wrapped in cloth next to it. Uncovering the cloths of the items, he comes to see that they are the three tongues of the victims. And as he is about to grab the chest and stand up, he hears a gun clicking behind his head about to fire. END

Main Research to help me make my Treatment

Throughout the past summer, my dad was reading a book called ‘Lost Girls.. An Unsolved American Mystery’ by Robert Kolker. This book is about the murders of female prostitutes in Long Island, New York, by a suspected serial killer. Although the book focuses on only five of the murders – as those five corpses were found in the same area, in a similar fashion – there were in fact 17 murders of prostitutes over 15 years, all suspected to be done by the same person. Mysteriously, the serial killer is yet to be found, as even though there were suspects, there just wasn’t enough evidence to make a proper case.
Lost Girls: An Unsolved American Mystery

From finding great interest in this story, I decided to use it for my thriller, but instead of following the exact same plot (which would also be difficult as I am based in London) I decided to manipulate the story. So, in a nutshell, my thriller will be about the murders of male teenage drug dealers that come from a middle-class background in London, by a suspected serial killer. It will follow the unfolding investigation of a young rookie policeman in North-West London, and the struggles and mysteries he encounters along the way.

Sunday, 1 January 2017

WORK OVER CHRISTMAS HOLIDAY
Throughout the christmas holiday, I was set the task of writing a treatment for a thriller. It took me a week or so of hard thinking to come up with the main plot of the story. The second week, I began writing it out, and also added several different new ideas to it along the way.